Analogies and Metaphors

These were too funny to pass up. It’s an email Bob (ruserious) sent. I can’t decide which one I like best. They are all so good! LMAO
I dedicate this to Indi…. (she’ll know why)
 BIG HUGS, Steph
Every year, English teachers from across the USA can
submit their collections of actual analogies and
metaphors found in high school essays.
These excerpts are published each year to the
amusement of teachers across the country. Here are
last year’s winners.

1. Her face was a perfect oval, like a circle that had
its two sides gently compressed by a Thigh Master.

2. His thoughts tumbled in his head, making and
breaking alliances like underpants in a dryer without
Cling Free.

3. He spoke with the wisdom that can only come from
experience, like a guy who went blind because he
looked at a solar eclipse without one of those boxes
with a pinhole in it and now goes around the country
speaking at high schools about the dangers of looking
at a solar eclipse without one of those
boxes with a pinhole in it.

4. She grew on him like she was a colony of E. Coli,
and he was room-temperature Canadian beef.

5. She had a deep, throaty, genuine laugh, like that
sound a dog makes just before it throws up.

6. Her vocabulary was as bad as, like, whatever.

7. He was as tall as a six-foot, three-inch tree.

8. The revelation that his marriage of 30 years had
disintegrated because of his wife’s infidelity came as
a rude shock, like a surcharge at a formerly
surcharge-free ATM machine.

9. The little boat gently drifted across the pond
exactly the way a bowling ball wouldn’t.

10. McBride fell 12 stories, hitting the pavement like
a Hefty bag filled with vegetable soup.

11. From the attic came an unearthly howl. The whole
scene had an eerie, surreal quality, like when you’re
on vacation in another city and Jeopardy comes on at
7:00 p.m. Instead of 7:30.

12. Her hair glistened in the rain like a nose hair
after a sneeze.

13. The hailstones leaped from the pavement, just like
maggots when you fry them in hot grease.

14. Long separated by cruel fate, the star-crossed
lovers raced across the grassy field toward each other
like two freight trains, one having left Cleveland at
6:36 p.m. Traveling at 55 mph, the other from Topeka
at 4:19 p.m. At a speed of 35 mph.

15. They lived in a typical suburban neighborhood with
picket fences that resembled Nancy Kerrigan’s teeth.

16. John and Mary had never met. They were like two
hummingbirds who had also never met.

17. He fell for her like his heart was a mob
informant, and she was the East River.

18. Even in his last years, Granddad had a mind like a
steel trap, only one that had been left out so long,
it had rusted shut.

19. Shots rang out, as shots are wont to do.

20. The plan was simple, like my brother-in-law Phil.
But unlike Phil, this plan just might work.

21. The young fighter had a hungry look, the kind you
get from not eating for a while.

22. He was as lame as a duck. Not the metaphorical
lame duck, either, but a real duck that was actually
lame, maybe from stepping on a land mine or something.

23. The ballerina rose gracefully en Pointe and
extended one slender leg behind her, like a dog at a
fire hydrant.

24. It was an American tradition, like fathers chasing
kids around with power tools.

25. He was deeply in love. When she spoke, he thought
he heard bells, as if she were a garbage truck backing


7 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Litespreader
    Dec 26, 2006 @ 11:55:52

    oh crap!  i haven\’t laughed this hard in a long time.  i love this.  happy new year steph..  when is the big day? (or was?)


  2. Bob
    Dec 26, 2006 @ 18:13:46

    ROFLMAO!!  Glad you liked that one!!  Hope you and your family had a Very Merry Christmas!!!!
    xoxo    Bob~
    PS  Happy Birthday too!!!!!!!!  (K)


  3. Greg
    Dec 27, 2006 @ 12:44:55

    Hey…Those students talk like me???
    Happy New Year!!!


  4. EdgyKay
    Dec 27, 2006 @ 21:18:16

    Hey! Today\’s your birthday, isn\’t it?!?
    I\’m now going to sing you my special birthday song:
    Happy birthday to you!
    Happy birthday to you!
    Happy birthday, dear Stephanie, who sends BIG HUGS to everyone but I think forgets to give some to herself because she\’s so busy making other people feel good with her funny stories and encouragement and stuff, but who also gets to take great vacations and looks like an island girrrrrrrrrrrrrrllllllllllll,
    Happy birthday to you!
    Hope it was fabulous!


  5. KatSoup
    Dec 27, 2006 @ 21:27:53

    Happy B day
    if i had to pick a favorite it would be The hailstones leaped from the pavement, just likemaggots when you fry them in hot grease.
    I had a b day too, I feel like i got something over on MSN they didn\’t change it on my space.  Did you slip past em too?


  6. Stephanie
    Dec 28, 2006 @ 09:02:50

    OH TY! Wow, I got serenaded by Kay! I had a good birthday. Bought myself an antique Japanese doll (I collect them) and my husband bought me a dozen roses (I was shocked!) They are gorgeous, and smell wonderful.
    Kat, I love #17/18 and 19… well I love them all but those three are my favorites.
    BIG HUGS, Steph


  7. SAAM
    Dec 31, 2006 @ 08:58:10

    Those are great
    And happy Belate Birthday!!!!SAAM


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